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0001名無しなのに合格
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2018/07/16(月) 12:13:02.09ID:DRXgrmhg
By the way, I dreamt a joyful and adventurous dream last night. Therein my wife and I were
in a Renault FT-17, a well-known French tank invented during the WWI. While my wife sat at the wheel, I was seeking for enemies through its cupola.
By and by a host of japs with a rifle in their hand came in front of us, but all of them were slain by my accurate shots. I scouted out one jap after another, but they never rivaled out our tank, and
immediately they smashed into chunks of meat.
While shooting hostile yellow bugs, our tank accidentally leapt down from the cliff, but escaped being crushed, for an unbelievable phenomenon happened. Thank god, our tank was flying!

Thereafter we found a jap’s zero-fighter coming toward us. Our tank responded by looping the loop and flying behind the Zero, then I shot a merciless shot at him.
His right wing was smashed and the foe’s plane fell down onto the sea. As bad luck had it, the battleship Yamato was cruising there at that moment.
To their misfortune, the Zero crashed
onto the Yamato and the jap’s battleship exploded and broke into two. It’s the very suicide-attack, Kamikaze! lol

Childish as this dream might be, it was so enjoyable to me that I couldn’t help smiling on the train heading for the office this morning.
0002名無しなのに合格
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2018/07/16(月) 12:22:36.95ID:JoC6kqRn
>>1
なんやこれ小説やろ
変なことすんな
0003名無しなのに合格@アフィカス死ね
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2018/07/16(月) 13:03:29.53ID:2xgZIg5t
国立大生のエリート様が夢の中でバカワタクを殺しまくるけどバカワタクの脳死コピペ連投アタックで一瞬追
い詰められたと思ったらレスバの神がエリート様に舞い降りてレスバ中ワタクの自演がバレたことで逃げ切り凌ぐも馬鹿田大生が自虐学生証晒しで迫ってきたかと思えば受サロ民の袋叩きに合いボスワタクの低能未熟大生と共にスレを去った
ってことで良いのか?スマン英語苦手で
0004名無しなのに合格
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2018/07/16(月) 13:23:18.21ID:IsRV1XAS
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また来年受けてね!
0005名無しなのに合格
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2018/07/16(月) 13:30:53.79ID:u8hfh9VU
suck まで読んだ
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2018/07/16(月) 13:41:15.06ID:PWGl6l6M
>>1
I were in a...ってなんやねん?
偏差値20ぐらいやろ?
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2018/07/16(月) 13:52:55.42ID:V+FwqzSm
わざわざそんな小難しい表現を使わなくても…って思う箇所は結構ある
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